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【一】:2014高考英语作文写作专项训练之说明文
2014高考英语作文写作专项训练之说明文 （基于2013全国各地高考试题的分析整理）
一、 文体题型概述 （一）统计分析
说明文是今年来高考英语书面表达比较常见的一种体裁，其特点是对事物或做事情的方法进行客观地介绍。有些书面表达题虽是以应用文的形式出现的，但其主要内容也属于说明文。以下是2013年高考说明文的分类统计：
分析上表可以看出，去年高考英语说明文以图画或者文字形式出现，并且常与其他文体
整合考察。要求学生能够按照一定的说明顺序对一定事物或事理进行介绍和说明，以达到实际应用和交际的目的。 （二）技巧策略
写说明文宜采用三段式：第一段主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的；第二段说明事物的主要特征或做事情的方法步骤；第三段进行总结概括。时态通常用一般现在时。
写作时应遵循以下几个步骤：
1、仔细审题，明确说明对象，抓住要说明的事物或事理的主要特征。
2、选择合理的说明顺序（时间顺序、空间顺序或逻辑顺序）分层次进行说明，注意条理清晰。
3、选择恰当的说明方法，比如定义法、举例法、比较法和细节描述法等，不要遗漏主要内容。
4、根据说明顺序及内容确定过渡词和恰当的句型结构。文字应客观、简洁、明了，不要追求华丽和加入太多个人观点。 5、图标类作文注意：
（1）图表和数据内容不一定要全部描述。 （2）善于抓住总的规律，趋势，归纳增减率。
（3）时态：特定时间用过去时。经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时。 （4）要适当运用一些高级词汇并灵活使用图表类写作常用的经典好句型。 （三）常用表达 1、过渡词
表顺序：first, second, third, in the first place, above all, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, besides, what’s more, in addition, furthermore, moreover, another, also, especially, in particular 表时间：first, then, next, after that, next, finally now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明：for example, for instance, in this case, such as…, take… for example，in fact, actually
表顺序：first, then, next, finally, in the first place, last but not least, above all, first and foremost,
表递进：in addition，besides，fruthermore，what’s more，on the other hand，meanwhile，for one thing…for another, on top of that, apart from that, 表举例：for example，for instance，such as，a typical （striking） example is that，a case in point 表目的: for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,
表总结：in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, as we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion, 2、常用句型：
1) Nowadays it is common to use…, but not knowing how to use…keeps many people away
from enjoying the wonderful service that …has brought us.
2) As is known to all, it is important to …. Therefore, an increasing number of people are
showing more interest in how to …
3) With the development of …, there is an increasing need for people to know how to … 4) There are several steps to follow./ Here are some tips. 5) The first thing to do is to …
6) Although …is important, but without …, all the efforts you have made will be in vain. 7) To ensure success, there is one more thing that you must bear in mind, that is… 8) If you can do what has been mentioned above, you can guarantee success. 9) With the help of the above methods, you will achieve you goal soon. 3、图表式作文写作模板
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势) 二、 经典例题分析 （2006全国卷I） 假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。 注意：
1、 字数100左右
2、 可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯 3、 开头语已为你写好 Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.______________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
注：上面的小字是：借阅须知：每人每次5本，借期10天。下面的小字是：开放时间：周一至周五，早9：00至晚7：00，周末闭馆。） 【例文1】 Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Here is some information about it. Located between the garden and the teaching building, our school library situates in the center of the school and has beautiful surroundings. It has all kinds of books, magazines and newspapers providing us with all kinds of knowledge and the latest information. According to the rules, each student can borrow no more than 5 books at a time for at most 10 days, and it is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m every day except weekends, which makes it convenient for us students to read in it or to borrow books from it.
The school library is our favorite place after class. We enjoy reading in it. 点评：该生作文属于第五档（23分）。考生充分理解了题目要求，带着一种自豪的语气但又很客观准确地介绍了学校图书馆。写作内容覆盖了两幅图中所有要点，在说明第一幅图时采用了选择中心坐标法，在说明第二幅图时将图书馆规则和便于学生使用结合起来，逻辑非常清晰，全文结构紧凑。该考生对倒装句、定语从句使用熟练恰当，行文流畅。完全达到了预期的写作目的。 【例文2】 Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last latter asking about our library.
Our library, which is surrounded by green trees, ①located in the middle of our school, just behind the garden and in front of the teaching building. Even though it has not ②a large space, there are quantities of books for us to read or to borrow. We can borrow books from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. on ③workdays. And each of us can borrow 5 books once for a t most 10 days. Magazines are available too, but we can’t take them away.
I love my school library. Welcome to our school to visit it!
点评：该生作文属于第四档(18分) 该文基本覆盖了所有主要内容，也应用了一些高级表达法和词汇，语言基本准确，但也出现了一些错误（文中①②③处）。第一幅图说明较好，采用了中心坐标法，但第二幅图在说明过程中缺乏一定的顺序和逻辑，只运用了简单的连接词and。总的说来完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的。 三、 高考真题演练 （2013安徽卷）
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面 的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求：
1、描述漫画内容；
2、分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3、提出你的看法。 注意：
1、短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2、考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3、词数120左右
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4、文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇:pave the way
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
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（2013江苏卷）
请根据你对以下两幅图的理解, 以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题, 用英语写一篇作文。
参考词汇: banner (横幅) stump (树桩)
你的作文应包括以下内容: 1、简要描述两幅图的内容; 2、概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;
3、举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意:
1、可参照图片适当发挥; 2、作文词数150 左右;
3、作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
___________________________________________________________________________________________ （2013上海卷） 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求： 1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）。
___________________________________________________________________________________________ （2013辽宁卷）
一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。 写作要点：
1、它是中国传统节日之一； 2、家人团聚； 3、赏月、吃月饼、
4、还有旅游、访友等其他活动。 5.…… 注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯； 3、开头语已您写好，不讲总词数。
参考词汇：中秋节:the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历: lunar calendar 赏月: enjoy the full moon 月饼: moon cake
The Mid- Autumn Fetival
th ……
（2013重庆卷）
调查显示，中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而频临灭绝，目前总数不足1000只。暇设你是李华，现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信，请他们关注这一状况并提供帝助。内容应包括:
·说明写信目的 ·简述江豚现状 ·希望WWF如何帮助（比如：资助江豚保护项目等） ·表示感谢并期待回复
注意： （1）词数不少于80； （2）在答题卡上作答 （3）书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）。 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a student from Chongqing,China.
___________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua
四、 真题参考范文 （2013安徽卷） One possible version
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. （2013江苏卷）
Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.
The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering
【二】:高考英语作文----地点介绍类说明文(经典原创)
地点介绍类说明文
《李华欢迎你》 迎接第一个晨曦，李华在这等你，慢点来吧不着急，他年年都留级。
语言特点
1. 时态：多用一般现在时
2. 方位词准确运用，过渡语使用恰当
3. 遣词造句要简洁，不可过分渲染或模棱两可
sb要来sp, 请李华介绍…
你的英国朋友Bob即将到你所在的国际学校学习。 应他要求，请你写一封e-mail
历史：40年历史，2006年重建 (1句)
2. 位置: 教学大楼的左面，大操场的西面，面朝学校大门（1句）
3. 结构：占地750平方米，三层，一楼游泳池，二楼排球、篮球、羽毛球场、三楼有报告厅（2句） 4. 特点：设备现代，环境优美（1句）
5. 开放时间：6:30 a.m. -10:00 p.m., 周末照常开放。（1句） Dear Bob,
I am so glad to hear that you are coming to study in our school. (www.shanpow.com_说明文高中英语作文。
写信目的gym.
(具体介绍www.shanpow.com_说明文高中英语作文。
(祝愿I am looking forward to your coming.
Sincerely yours,
Lihuawww.shanpow.com_说明文高中英语作文。
(09.全国) 介绍以下内容：
1. 简况：长800米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 2. 位置：天安门广场南面；
3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇：步行街：pedestrian street；当当车：trolley car； 地铁：subway Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street.（写信目的）
（具体介绍）Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 but
（祝愿）I’m sure you’ll like it. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours, LiHua
(06.四川) 假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick
Dear Nick,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August. （写信目的）（具体介绍）Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys（享有）many world-famous places of interest, such
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（祝愿）I'm sure you'll have a good time. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(03.全国卷) 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob
来信请你在学校附近为
500元。
注意：１. 词数：100左右；２.
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming in September.（写信目的） I’ve found a place for you.
It’s a small flat the school. In fact, it’s only one stop.
（结尾）Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
Yours, Lihua
(06.
全国卷I、II)假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob两幅图中的相关信息。
内容要点：
1. 图书馆的位置：前有花园，后有教学楼 2. 内部环境：宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等 3. 图书馆功能：借阅、借阅数量和借期 4. 开放时间 5. 合适的结尾
June 8 Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. （写信目的） （具体介绍）Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building
（简单总结）We all like our library very much.
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Best wishes.
Li Hua
广告宣传
(07.全国)
应包括：
1. 地点：据白山入口处500米；
2. 房间及价格：单人间（共20间），100元/天； 双人间（共15间），150元/天； 热水淋浴；
3. 餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）； 4. 5. 欢迎预定。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
（具体介绍）Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 .
（客套话）All are welcome!
