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【一】:2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)
2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)
一. 用词准确;表达地道
【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)
美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。
注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
home, so like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking in our or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充
该校请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回
l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers,
just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩
【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class” 注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 April 12 is memorable because our class had a on that day. In the of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名师点评】
与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
【试题回放】开放作文
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we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
【名师点评】
本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。
三. 复合句为写作增色
【全国卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter watching hbirthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：
1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.;5.;6.合适的结尾。
达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句
积累卡片英汉互译
好词 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育
好句I’d like a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard 正是你们的努力工作让苏
全国卷II】【试题回放】
写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米;
2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。 注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms,
with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名师点评】
本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。
【重庆卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给 自我介绍
得知的情况
表示鼓励
打算为她做什么
祝她早日康复
注意：
1. 2.
3. 词数100 4. Dear Amy,
I’m you got the lung cancer you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。
积累卡片
好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠
我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。
好处：which引导限制性定语从句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!
好处：掷地有声，语言准确。
四. 结构清晰,句式准确
【江苏卷高考英语】 【试题回放】
2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
u 每天锻炼一小时
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿， 注意：
1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、 词数：120
3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动—— 教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was 00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
though our Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do now!
本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。
积累卡片
好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。
评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。
好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.
【二】:2016年高考全国卷二英语作文
2016年高考作文
第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：
注意：
1．词数
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
. 100左右；
One Possible Version
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It
thwill start from June 15 and last for three
weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you show me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good change for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【三】:全国卷历年英语高考作文
1.【2015·新课标全国II】书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1. 出发及返回时间；
2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结语已为你写好。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】本作文从实际生活出发，以英语的交际性和实用性为目标，兼顾尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意义。体现了课程标准要求的以知识运用为教学目标的要求。在高三备考时，应该多从把语言作为交流的
工具的角度去准备书面表达。
2.【2015·新课标全国I】
书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
栏目介绍；www.shanpow.com_2016年高考英语全国卷1作文。
稿件内容；
稿件长度：约400词；
交稿日期：6月28日前。
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；
开头语已为你写好。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求写一封给美国朋友彼得写信的约稿，为学校校英文报“外国文化”栏目刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的文章。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同
