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【一】:简体字与繁体字Why Traditional Chinese Characters are better than Simplified Characters
Why I do NOT like Simplified Chinese Characters at all
When I write, text or type, I always use traditional Chinese characters instead of simplified Chinese characters if the situation allows. I don’t personally use simplified Chinese, which the only type of Chinese characters that Chinese people learn from school after 1956. So some people like some of my relatives and friends asked me why I always use traditional ones,they guess that I embrace Taiwan after I met my Taiwanese girlfriend (actually I did use traditional onesbefore I met her, but my girlfriend does help me a lot on that).
And today,when I was teaching Mandarin, I asked my students a question:“the Chinese characters are originally from...?” (I have taught them Chinese characters are from images and symbols.) And one student raised his hand very confidently and shouted his answer “Japan!” I was shocked at the first moment and I shook my head and laughed. But wait! Actually, his answer is partly right... Some of the simplified Chinese characters arebrought from Simplified Kanji (Chinese characters) of Japan...
Things are just becoming a little bit more complicated.
Take a deep breath and let me explain…
In fact, around the time of the World Wars,the nationalism became more and more popular and stronger in those former western colonies or western influenced countries. After their independence, they all wanted to show something pride and
unique in their culture, so most of east Asian countries from so called "Chinese Culture Circle (Confucianism Culture Circle)", were hastening to get rid of the influence of China, such as Japan, Korea and Vietnam, started their own process to simplify, change or eliminate the Chinese characters in their written language. At mostly meanwhile, new Chinese regime was eager to build their new culture, and the scholars in the Chinese Character Development/reform Committee was strongly influenced by “the May-4th” Period dreams and values.In that period, a lot of China’s intellectuals were extremely anti-traditional cultures and moral values. They wanted to establish a new Chinese culture. These scholars were the main power of the committee we were talking about, and the new regime led themto start the processing of their characters simplifying. After these processes, the beauty of Chinese characters, the artistic connections with its imagery symbolswere badly and fatally broken. For example, Simplified Chinese takes the “heart”away from the “love”(爱instead of愛, “心” means heart);Takes the “wheat”away from the “noodle”(面instead of麵,“麥”means wheat); Takes the "seeing each other" from the “closeness” or “intimacy” (亲instead of親,“見”means meeting or seeing)... and I have tons of examples to show if needed...
Well, if someone wants to argue or defend for Simplified
Chinese characters by using the point of Simplified characters are easier to write, I would say that simplified characters are easier to be written, but they are way less systematic and hard to understand by comparing to traditional characters. Why?
Because after simplifying, it has so many single Chinese characterswhich has more than one meaning. For example, after the simplifying, 面 is noodle and also face. What the heck!If you go to China, you willread the menufor Beef Noodle, which it logically could be “beef face”, and Ramen or “La Mian” (literally twisting, stretching, folding or kneading noodle), it could logically turn to “twisting or stretching or kneading face”! Wow! That hurts!
One more examplewhich is even more distractive and misguiding, after simplifying,发 means hair and launchorproduce. But in its traditional way, 發 means produce or launch, hair is another word which is 髮. You can tell the top right part which represent the hair, so 理髮(haircut) were changed to 理发(“haircut or launch-cut”).What is even worse? In simplified 发, if you teach, you have to teach different pronunciations in different cases. When they combined two different words in one, it caused one word, which has different pronunciations with different meanings. By the way, to combine different characters to one character was mostly Mao’s idea, but the thing seems weird because you can barely see him to write simplified characters. When I studied in Beijing Language and Culture University, I remember there was a plaque on the wall of the dining hall building, it has a sentence quoted from “The Literary Mind and the Carving of
Dragons”(文心雕龍),in that sentence, if you write this sentence in simplified characters, then it has a big ambiguity between “launch” and “hair”. (理發(*理发)而文見)
In this case, although I believe it is easier to write (less strokes) in simplified, but the simplified Chinese became harder to understand and also learn by heart! Sometimes, the Simplified Chinese character is way to distractive!
If you are an English or some Romance languages speaker, you can be easily fooled by saying that simplified Chinese are easier to learn and write, for example, in English, you spell the words by its pronunciations, if you say “th-an-ks”, you can spell it “thanks” by the way you say it. But Chinese is totally different! It is just not working out that way. Why?
Be aware of this! Chinese is the ONLY surviving language, whichhaslogogram writing. That meansif you write a Chinese character, you can probably tell some meaning of the character by the writing symbols. If you see parts like“食”,“金” or“心”, then the character has very likely the meaning of “food”, ”metal or chemical elements”, and ”thinking or by heart”. In my opinion, the traditional Chinese is a little harder to write, but the beauty and logic of Chinese is right in it, I don’t mind to write some more strokes to make my hand writing more beautiful and making more sense. Furthermore, in nowadays, we have very few opportunities to hand write something anyway. Why not bring the beautiful traditional Chinese characters back!
Speaking of bringing it back, in fact, in some aspects, it never
goes away. In Taiwan, Hong Kong, Macao and so many overseas Chinese communities (like China towns in the US or Malaysia), traditional Chinese characters are still being vastly used. Even in China, Chinese calligraphy is mostly written by using traditional Chinese characters.Why? Because it is more beautiful. That it one of the most important points of making art, expressing of beauty. And so many company logo designs and business banners and signs are written by using traditional Chinese. I believe this is why the logo of the school I work, which is called East Point Academy istraditional “東”(means East)instead of simplified “东”even though most of Chinese teachers here from China teach simplified Chinese.www.shanpow.com_believe繁体写法。
I know in so many countries outside China, the reason for people there to learn Chinese is for communicating and business opening with Chinese people, and Chinese people in China use simplified Chinese. It sounds very practical and it’s no reason to blame to be practical. But speaking of deeper levelsstudy and culturally understanding, why don’t I teach both simplified and traditional? I know some of top universities in the US and Europe do learn traditional Chinese in their Chinese or Sino studies, such as Columbia University in NY, etc. Even some Chinese elementary or high schools in California (where the biggest Chinese population is) provide lower graders only traditional Chinese and higher graders to choose from traditional and simplified. Why traditional first? Like what I said, it is more systematic for understanding.
In the recent years of China, people can probably have the feeling that there are some more self-concentrated or culturally
【二】:六级作文写法及经典句型
六级作文经典句型
开头opening sentences/paragraph
1. Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.www.shanpow.com_believe繁体写法。
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
2. Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
3. Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face. 如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
4. It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
5. Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…
6. With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
7. A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… However, others believe that….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为….. 然而其他人却认为...
People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to… 关于…. 人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,…. If we want to do something… , it is essential that…
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we…只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.
很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that… 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that…我无法完全同意这一观点…. Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边. I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….
在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why… 给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
Why did… ? For one thing… For another…. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是….
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows. 我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议. The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, …. 就某事而言,…
It was apparent/evident that… 很显然,….
It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that…
可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…
认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….
There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly.
比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally. 对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast
列举
for example, for instance, such as, take …for example. Except (for), to illustrate(@举例说明@加插图).
时间
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
顺序
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important. 可能
presumably, probably, perhaps, in all likelihood/probability, be likely/liable to
解释
in other words/to put it in another way换句话说, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler termswww.shanpow.com_believe繁体写法。
递进
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally
让步
【三】:英文简历开头及结尾的写法
求职信开头处常用语
■ My interest in the position of Masonry Supply Manager has prompted me to forward my resume for your review an consideration.
■ The sales Manager position advertised in the Chicago Tribune on October 12 intrigues me. I believe you will find me well-qualified.
■ Your October 30 advertisement in The Jackson Review calls for an Administrative Assistant with a background rich in a variety of administrative skills ,such as mine.
■ My desire to locate a responsible position in plant management has prompted me to forward the attached for your consideration.
■ I am writing to inquire opportunities for computer programmers in your organization.
■ Are you currently seeking a security specialist to maintain or upgrade the security of your organization?If so, I would like to apply for the position.
■ My interest in joining Any Corporation as a licensed electrician had prompted me to forward my resume for your review.
■ Having majored in mathematics at Rice University, where I also worked as a Research Assistant, I am confident that I would make a successful addition to your Economics Research Department.
■ At the suggestion of Walter Durrane, I am enclosing my resume for your consideration pertaining to consulting or related assignments with Any Corporation.
■ I am forwarding my resume in regards to the opening we discussed in your Marketing Department.
■ I want a job. Not any job with any company,but a particular job with your company. Here are my reasons:Your organization is more than just a company. It is an institution in the minds of the Chinese public.
■ Attention of Human Resource Manager:Like many other young men, I am looking for a position. I want to get started. At the bottom,perhaps,but started.
【四】:励志的个性英文签名
每天的不断前行,我们有时候也需要停下脚步听听自己内心的声音,多给自己励志,多给自己前行的力量。学习啦小编给大家收集了励志的个性英文签名,一起来看看吧。
励志的个性英文签名(一)
1、In our task at the beginning of mind decided finally had much success, which is more than any other factor is very important.
我们在一项任务刚开始时的心态决定了最后有多大的成功,这比任何其他因素都重要。
2、When we start with a positive attitude and view themselves as successful when we start a success.
当我们开始用积极的心态并把自己看成成功者时我们就开始成功了。
3、Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.
如果你想要成功,不要去追求成功;尽管做你自己热爱的事情并且相信它,成功自然到来。
4、The talent of success is nothing more than doing well whatever you do without a thought of time.
成功之路没它,唯全力投入工作,而不稍存沽名钓誉之心。
5、Those who turn back never reach the summit.
回头的人永远到不了最高峰!
6、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.
你不能改变你的过去,但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了,生命就浪费了。
7、How do we treat the life, the life how we treat.
我们怎样对待生活,生活就怎样对待我们。
8、Do not, for one repulse, forgo the purpose that you resolved to effort.
不要只因一次挫败,就放弃你原来决心想达到的目的。
9、While there is life there is hope.
一息若存,希望不灭。
10、Great works are performed not by strength , but by perseverance.——Samuel Johnson
完成伟大的事业不在于体力,而在于坚韧不拔的毅力。——英国作家和评论家约翰逊
11、Genius only means hard-working all one's life.——Mendeleyev
天才只意味着终身不懈的努力。——俄国化学家门捷列耶夫
12、It never will rain roses.When we want to have more roses we must plant trees.——G. Eliot
天上不会掉下玫瑰来,如果想要更多的玫瑰,必须自己种植。——英国小说家艾略特
13、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.——Bonapart Napoleon
凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。——法国皇帝拿破仑
14、Miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly for them.——C. Weizmann
奇迹有时候是会发生的,但是你得为之拼命的努力。——爱尔兰总统魏茨曼
15、If you have great talents, industry will improve them;if you have but moderate abilities, industry will supply their deficiency.——Joshuas Reynolds
如果你很有天赋,勤勉会使其更加完善;如果你能力一般,勤勉会补足其缺陷。——美国散文家雷诺兹
16、Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal,there is no secure direction; without direction ,there is no life. ——Leo Tolstory
理想是指路明灯。没有理想,就没有坚定的方向;没有方向,就没有生活。——俄国作家托尔斯泰
17、Efficiency comes from diligence. In shortage in the play ground transportation into Si, was destroyed by the idler. —— Han Yu
业精于勤荒于嬉,行成于思而毁于惰。 ——韩愈
18、Do not, for one repulse,give up the purpose that you resolved to effect.——Willian Shakespeare
不要只因一次失败,就放弃你原来决心想要达到的目的。——莎士比亚
19、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something. A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.——J. Barrymore
只要一个人还有追求,他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想,一个人才算老。——巴里摩尔
20、You have to believe in yourself . That's the secret of success.——Charles Chaplin , American actor
人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀。——美国演员 卓别林. C.
21、One's real value first lies in to what degree and what sense he set himself.——Einstein Germany
一个人的真正价值首先决定于他在什么程度上和在什么意义上从自我解放出来。——爱因斯坦德国
22、The important thing in life is to have a great aim,and the determination to attain it.——Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
人生重要的事情是确定一个伟大的目标,并决心实现它。——德国诗人、剧作家歌德
23、If you wish to succeed, you should use persistence as your good friend,experience as your reference, prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry. ——Thomas Edison
如果你希望成功,当以恒心为良友,以经验为参谋,以谨慎为兄弟,以希望为哨兵。——美国发明家爱迪生
24、Dare and the world always yields.If it beats you sometimes, dare it again and again and it will succumb.——W.M Thackeray
大胆挑战,世界总会让步。如果有时候你被它打败了,不断地挑战,它总会屈服地。——英国小说家萨克雷
25、The unexamined life is not worth living.——Socrates
混混噩噩的生活不值得过。——苏格拉底
26、Happiness, I have discovered, is nearly always a rebound from hard work. ——Grayson
我发现,辛勤工作的报酬几乎总是幸福。——格雷森
27、Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.——John Ruskin
生活没有目标,犹如航海没有罗盘。——罗斯金
28、There is no such thing as a great talent without great will - power.——Balzac
没有伟大的意志力,便没有雄才大略。——巴尔扎克
29、Our destiny offers not the cup of despair, but the chalice of opportunity. So let us seize it, not in fear, but in gladness.——R.M. Nixon
命运给予我们的不是失望之酒,而是机会之杯。因此,让我们毫无畏惧,满心愉悦地把握命运。——尼克松
30、Fear not that the life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning.——J.H. Newman
不要害怕你的生活将要结束,应该担心你的生活永远不会真正开始。——纽曼
励志的个性英文签名(二)
1、Gods determine what you're going to be.——Julius Erving
人生的奋斗目标决定你将成为怎样的人。——欧文
2、Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.——Louis Pasteur
意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石。——法国化学家巴斯勒
3、All that you do, do with your might; things done by halves are never done right.——R.H. Stoddard
做一切事情都应尽力而为,半途而废永远不行。——美国诗人斯托达德
4、An aim in life is the only fortune worth finding.——Robert Louis Stevenson
生活的目标,是唯一值得寻找的财富。——史蒂文森
5、Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.——Friedrich Schiller
只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人,才能够轻而易举的完成困难的事。——德国剧作家诗人席勒
6、Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value.——A. Einstein
不要为成功而努力,要为做一个有价值的人而努力。——爱因斯坦
7、You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success.——Charles Chaplin
人必须有自信,这是成功的秘密。——卓别林
8、We must accept finite disappointment, but we must never lose infinite hope.——Mattin Luther King
我们必须接受失望,因为它是有限的,但千万不可失去希望,因为它是无穷的。——马丁·路德·金
9、Energy and persistence conquer all things.——Benjamin Franklin
能量加毅力可以征服一切。——富兰克林
10、Cease to struggle and you cease to live.——Thomas Carlyle
生命不止,奋斗不息。——卡莱尔
11、There is no such thing as a great talent without great will - power.——Balzac
没有伟大的意志力,便没有雄才大略。——巴尔扎克
12、A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm.——C. M. Schwab
无论何事,只要对它有无限的热情你就能取得成功。——美国实业家施瓦布
13、Strength alone knows conflict, weakness is below even defeat, and is born vanquished.——Swetchine
只有强者才懂得斗争;弱者甚至失败都不够资格,而是生来就是被征服的。——斯威特切尼
14、The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them.——Bernara Shaw
在这个世界上取得成就的人,都努力去寻找他们想要的机会,如果找不到机会, 他们便自己创造机会。——萧伯纳
15、Ideal are like the stars --- we never reach them ,but like mariners , we chart our course by them.——Carl Schurz
理想犹如天上的星星,我们犹如水手,虽不能达到天上,但是我们的航程可凭借它指引。——美国政治家舒尔茨
16、A strong man will struggle with the storms of fate.——Thomas Addison
强者能同命运的风暴抗争。——爱迪生
17、The failures and reverses which await men - and one after another sadden the brow of youth - add a dignity to the prospect of human life, which no Arcadian success would do.——Henry David Thoreau
尽管失败和挫折等待着人们,一次次地夺走青春的容颜,但却给人生的前景增添了一份尊严,这是任何顺利的成功都不能做到的。——梭罗
18、My philosophy of life is work. ——Edison
我的人生哲学就是工作。——爱迪生
19、Victory won't come to me unless I go to it.——M.Moore
胜利是不会向我们走来的,我必须自己走向胜利。——穆尔
20、He who seize the right moment, is the right man.——Goethe
谁把握机遇,谁就心想事成。——歌德
【五】:如何写英文简历
如何写英文简历,简历是应聘者对你的第一印象。一份好的求职信,也能为您的成功画上重要的一笔。1、纸张的选用:最好使用品质优良,白色的信纸。信封要配合信纸的质料和颜色。
2、书写:求职者常需用亲手写信,字体要写得清洁可辩,龙飞凤舞的字迹无疑是自寻绝路。如果可能的话,使用打字机把信打出来。这样看起来比较具有商业气息。
3、格式:信文要适当地排列在信纸中,格式要一致,如采用齐头式(或斜线式)便需全部一致,不可中途改变
4、语法、标点和拼写:正确无误的语法、标点和拼写使读信人感到舒畅,错误的语法或拼写则十分明显,一望即知,予人坏印象。尤其要注意的是,绝不可把收信人的姓名或公司名号拼错了。
5、信封:信封上面的地址要完整,称谓要合时宜,信纸的折叠要适当,大小适合信封。
6、附件:求职信函通常不须附加推荐信,除非招聘广告有此要求。遇到这种情形,只须附上复印件即可。求职函内附加邮票或回址信封,强迫对方答覆的作法不足效法,除非对方有此要求。
如何写英文求职简历
应征函的第一段说明写信的缘起目的,有些专家认为不宜用分词子句,如下列各句作为第一句。因为这类句子被人用得大多,显得陈腐,失去突出的特性。
Replying to your advertisement…… Answering your advertisement…… Believing that there is an opportunity…… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company…… Having read your ad……
再比较下列三句。(a)句较差,经过修改后(b)句显得较恰当。
1、(a)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……
(b)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements.
2、(a)I believe after reading your advertisement in this morning‘s Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for. (b)your advertisement in this morning‘s Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this position
3、(a) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(b)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.
求职的人不得不提到希望待遇时,可用类似的句子:
1、 hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , I should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 我对待遇总是迟迟无法定个确切数目,但既然您要我说明,我认为月薪六千五百元就满意了。
2、Although it is difficult for me to say what compensation I should deserve, I should consider-a month a fair initial salary. 虽然我很难说待遇应该是多少,我以为起薪每月--很合理。
3、I feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should be. My first consideration is to satisfy you completely. However, while I am serving my apprenticeship, I should consider-a month satisfactory compensation. 余不敢冒昧说出起薪多少。最初余仅想要如何工作得好,使您满意。在学徒(试用)期间,月薪--即可。
提到待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用。
1、As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would$4,500 a month be too much? 至于起薪,我不知怎么说,月薪四千五百元会不会太多?
2、Do you think I should be asking too much if I said 5000 dollars a month? 若要求月薪五千元,会不会太高?
3、You know what my services are worth better than I do . All I want is a living wage. 对敝人工作的价值您比我更清楚。我仅想够糊口即可。
应征函或自荐函的结尾用语,试比较下列各句:
1、(a)软弱、羞怯的: If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 读完此信后倘您认为敝人可补缺,敝人愿和您一谈。
(b)改写后(较佳): If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、(a)怀疑,不妥、不安全的: If you‘re interested, let me know immediately, as I‘m sure and interview will convince you I‘m the man for the job. 倘贵公司有兴趣,请即告知,敝人深信与您面谈可以使您相信,敝人适合担任此职。
(b)改写后: May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Taipei 884525 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 可否赐予面谈?您可在每天上午七至九时,下午五时半至九时电884525号。
3、陈腐的句子: Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……(我希望您惠予面谈) Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……(等候您的佳音) Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(静候满意的答复)
4、哀求式的句子,不够完整(漏掉面谈时间): Won‘t you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781. 恳请惠予面谈。请打电话K-69781
(b)改写后: May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Kenmore 69781. You can reach me between nine and five o‘clock during the day. 可否惠予面谈以便进一步商讨?我的电话是K-69781。我从上午九时到下午五时都可接通。
5、太过自信的句子: I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430. 我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四时(星期二例外)打731430号电话通知我。
6、较具体有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (042) 4398. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be Kent House, Bretton Woods, New Hampshire. 可否惠予面谈?我住处电话为43981号。六月三十日以前我都在上址,七月二日以后,我的新址为新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。
应征函的语气
应征函要发挥最大的效果,语气必须肯定、自信、有创意而不过份夸张,如能事先洞察雇主的喜好,或其他人格特性,根据物以类聚的原理,应征函若能配合雇主的特性,求职的人一定可以比其他人占上风,获得面谈的机会。 比较下列各句语气上有何不同:
1、I think that I should probably make a good bookkeeper for you. 我想我可能成为贵公司的好簿记号。
2、I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your bookkeeping position. 我想信我的经验和推荐人可以告诉您,我能够符合贵公司簿记员一职的特定需要。
3、I recently completed a course in filing at the Crosby School of Business. I am competent not only to install a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your organization, but I am also well qualified to operate it efficiently. 最近我在克洛斯比商业补习班读完一门档案处理的课程,我自信不仅可以设置一套档案人类系统符合您的要求,而且可以有效地操作。
4、I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I completed at the Crosby School of Business, I can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 我相信在克洛斯比商业实习班修完一门课后,我能够替贵公司设置并且操作一套档案分类系统。
第一句显得语气太弱,写信的人有点羞怯的样子。第二句有特殊风格,第三句太过自信,第四句,作者表示谦虚。







