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【一】:学生作文my good friend
学生作文my good friend
韩晨萧
My good friend
I have a good friend. He is a boy. He is my classmate. He is very tall and very strong. He likes to play sports. He can play basketball very well. And he likes to play basketball very much.
He is good at Maths. He always helps me at Maths. His English is not very good. So I usually help him with (at) English.
We often play together and we usually help each other. We always share everything interesting (inteting).
We will be friend forever! 83
六1郑俊岭
I have a good firend.His name is Peter.He is twelve years old.He is my classmate.He lives in Beijing.He like playing basketball,swimming and watching TV.He is very clever and friendly.We always play basketball together. We are good friends. 37
徐颖欣
My friend
I have a good friend. She is my classmate. Her name is Tracy .She is twelve. she is kind and careful. She is tall and a little fat. She has two bright eyes and long black hair. She likes blue and white. She usually goes to school on foot . We feel happy when we are together. We have lunch together; we play together. We both like sports very much. We always play badminton together. And we can play it very well. Her hobbies are listening to music and reading books. She likes winter. Because she can make a snowman in the winter. we always help each other . We are good friend! 113
茅微微
I have a good friend. She is my classmate. She is thirteen years old. She is tall and thin. She has two bright eyes and long hair. She likes black and white. She usually goes to school on foot but sometimes she goes to school by bus. Her hobbies are listening to music and reading books. She likes summer because she can swim in the holiday. We usually go shopping and play badminton together. We will be good friends forever. 80www.shanpow.com_作文My,good,friend—Tony。
My good friend 杨凯新
I have a good friend . He is my classmate . He is very tall . He is kind too . He can play basketball very much . He is 12 years old . He study Maths very well . He always plays with me . He likes play compurter games . We always learn form each other and help each other . He likes summer , but he doesn't like winter . He is a good boy at home . He always helps his mother to wash the dishes . His name is Sheng Ting Feng . We are good friends. 102
章诗琦
I have a good friend, she is my classmate. She is fat and tall, she has two small eyes and long hair. She like blue. We always play together, sometimes we eat together,we always share food for each other. She usually goes school by bus, we always go home together. She likes swimming and singing. We usually singing together. In the holiday, we sometimes read book in the library, We are happy every day. My friend is Lisa, we are good friends! 82
李宇暄
I have a good friend. His name is DaiXiaoYu. He is my classmate. He sits on my right. He is short and fat. His head is square. He has two black dark eyes. His nose is small, but his ears are big. His
favorite color is sky blue. He doesn't like pink at all. He sometimes walks to school , and sometimes goes to school by bus. He always very happy. I almost can see he laughs in our classroom. He is friendly to everybody , so I like him. He likes playing computer games very much , and he can play it very well. Except computer games , he also likes sports. We always help each other. We are good friends. 122
刘欢
My good friend
I have a good friend. His name is Parny. He is my classmate. His hair is short and black. He has two blue eyes. He is good at swimming. He can swim fast. His can speak English well. We always talk about English. We are happy everyday. Sometimes we play table tennis at weekends. Sometime we go to the library at afternoon. He likes to listen to the music with me. We always go to school together. We often help each other. We are good friend forever and never. 89
李雯珊
I have a good friend. She is my classmate. Her name is Linda. She’humor. And she is friendly toeveryboby. She is tall and thin. She has two bright eyes and long hair. She likes yellow and blue. She likes sports. She can play badminton very well. We usually play it together. We often help each other and share everything interesting. We will be good friends forever. 66
蔡侑伦 I have a good friend. He is my classmate. He is tall and thin. He has two bright eyes and short hair. He likes blue and green. He usually goes to school by bus but sometimes she goes to school on foot. His hobbies are playing football and reading books. He likes winter because he can play with snow and make a snowman in holiday. We will be good friends forever. 71 张诚悻
My good friend
I have a good friend.He is my classmate.He is tall and thin.He like green and blue.I usually go to school with he.He can run fast.He like listening to music very much.He favourite subjict is Music.Do you know he' name?Yes,he's name isTony.He is my good friend! 45
【二】:六年级作文
My Good Friend
Long Xiang is my good friend.Heis 11 years old this year.He is my classmate.He is tall andthin.
He likes P.E..His favourite sport is basketball.After school，he often plays basketball with his friends.He likes summer best.n summer，he often goes swimming.He is a good swimmer.
Sometimes he is very naughty(淘气的).He likes speaking English or telling jokes.He often makes us laugh.I like playing with him.
根据给出的材料，写一写Mike这个周末的活动计划。 Saturday Sunday
read a magazinewww.shanpow.com_作文My,good,friend—Tony。
learn Kungfu
watch TV
Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is
busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afterno
on. He is going to buy a book
this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu
this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.
根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。 Mary 是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。
My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English i
s good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.
题目： My net friend（我的网友）
要求：1。条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范； 2．要将提示词全部体现在作文中；不得少于50个单词。
提示词：（1）computer （2）net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈)
(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) （5）talk in English (用英语交谈)
My net friend
I am Tony. I have a computer. I have a new friend.
His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each
other in the chat room. We talk in English. My
English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him
very much. Do you want to have a net friend?
提示：根据下面所给出的这张Ann的小名片，以“我的好朋友”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍Ann的基本情况。 要求：
1、条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2、要将名片中的内容全部体现在作文中。
3、不少于60个单词。
My good friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Ann. Her Chinese
name is Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in Yuying Primary School. She is
in Class Four, Grade Six. She is twelve. She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is five years old. She
likes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!
短文写作。根据给出的提示和要求，写一篇65个单词左右的英语短文。 要求：1、写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay Hello, Jay,
I am very happy to be your net friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents , my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is the best in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you?
Bye- bye，Benson
【三】:My Friend 我的朋友
My name is Mike.I have a good friend.His name is Tony.He has two big eyes and a small mouth.
He is a good student.He is in No.1
Middle School.He goes to school from Monday to Friday.He usually gets up at 7 o’clock and goes to school at 8 o’clock.The frist class starts 9 o’clock,so he’s never late.In the morning,he has three classes.And he has two classes in the afternoon.For lunch,he usually eats lots of fruit and vegetables.
School is over at 4 o’clock in the
afternoon.After school,he always plays basketball with his classmates for an hour.Then,he goes home at 5:10.He eats dinner at 5:30.After that,he does his homework.Then he either watches TV or plays computer games.He often goes to bed at 9 o’clock.
MyFriend
This is my good friend Tony.Do youwww.shanpow.com_作文My,good,friend—Tony。
want to be my friends?My QQ is 1870064980.
【四】:作文练习
六年级英语期末作文专项练习
(一）同学们，你一定有很多的爱好，请你写一个你的爱好，字数不少于60个单词。 My hobby
My hobby is collecting stamps（集邮）. There are many stamps in my room. I like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much.
Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
（二）、根据材料，写写Mike这个周末的活动计划。(注意用一般将来时）
Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo on Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu on Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.
（三）描写你的周末生活，注意用一般现在时。
My Weekend
I have a happy weekend.
On Saturday morning I always have English classes at school. I study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.
So I love weekends.
（四）根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。
Mary 是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.
（五）、提示：根据下面所给出的这张Ann的小名片，以“我的好朋友”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍Ann的基本情况。要将名片中的内容全部体现在作文中。
My good friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Ann. Her Chinese name is Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in Yuying Primary School. She is in Class Four, Grade Six. She is twelve. She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is 5 years old. She likes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!
（六）题目： My net friend（我的网友）要将提示词全部体现在作文中；
提示词：（1）computer （2）net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈)(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) （5）talk in English (用英语交谈) （6）good now
My net friend
I am Tony. I have a computer. I have a new friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net.(上网）。 We often talk with each other in the
chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend?
（七）、短文写作。要求：1、写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay
Dear Jay,
I am very happy to be your net friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and I. My father is a doctor. He can drive a car. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is good in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you?
Yours, Amy
（八)请描写一下你的房间，注意要使用“there be ”句型。
My Bedroom
I have a nice and small bedroom. There is a beautiful bed and two small chairs. There is a big desk next to the window. I always do my homework at the desk. There is a family photo on the wall. I like my bedroom.
(九）、寒假很快就要到了，请你为你的寒假写一个计划。
My Winter Holiday
It’s January. My winter holiday is coming. I am going to England. I will go there by plane. I like the food in England.. In the winter holiday, I am going to play basketball. I am going to draw pictures, too. I will help my mother do some housework. I will be very happy in my winter holiday.
（十） Planting flowers
I want to plant a flower in my garden. First, I dig the soil. Then I put some seeds into the soil. Next I water it. I wait for a sprout. Then I wait for the flower to grow. I water it every day. It grows fast.
（十一） Planting Trees
It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.I want to plant a tree in our garden. First, I dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I water it. I am so excited and I wait for
the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. It grows fast.
（十二） I Love My Family
Here is a photo of my family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital . He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is 5 years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane. I love my family.
（十三） How to get to the science museum
We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is a show in the Museum. Do you know how to get to the science museum?
The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s not far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight for 5minutes, next turn left at the post office , then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum。
（十四）根据表格描述Alan’s day.
（十五）结合上表描述自己的一天
